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My final submission for The Luminarium: Illuminate
[link] ------- Collaboration with my good mate ------- 800x600 1024x768 1280x1024 1440x900 1600x1200 1680x1050 1920x1200 ------- Daily DeviationGiven 2009-04-18Hypergraf is a collaboration project by =GrungeTV and =Smiling-Demon that will rock your desktop. The background ties in perfectly with the render and lighting is superb. (Featured by ^splintered13) |
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April 15
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Critiques
The background, is awesome
The lighting is also smartly used.The orange light coming from the left side reflecting on the render, actually makes it look like a source of light from below this wall. And the blue from the top side also reflects on some areas of the 3D is also well executed. Thus, giving a contrast between two vibrant colours, also can be represented metamorphically with 'heaven & hell' or 'good & evil' (just a few examples).
The 3D itself is well created, the various forms all leading to the main shape creates an effect leading our eyes towards. The reflection of the 3D are also stunning.
The only thing I think could be worked on is the second render, it is similar to the first one, just a little smaller with a flip ... Maybe not put one at all and focus on the big render. Also, depth, I think some bit should be blurred and some on focus, giving a nice touch of 'realism'.
Hope it wasn't too long
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