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Overall I like the idea with the title - so your aim is cool, but I think you could improve this shot. Problem in this one is the light I think - therefore the whole picture looks a bit flat (not because of the curves, just because there is no direct sunlight). And that is often a problem with such "stormy" pictures. If you take a look at good and well-known stormy pictures by great artists you will often see, that the picture is takene at the beginning or in the end of the storm in order to have direct sunlight which will make the image more "plastic". And since your aim is to show us the headless mountain it could be a good thing to take a vertical panorama, because the right sight and expecially the left side don't add to the effect....altough the sheeps are nice. But if you like to have the sheeps in the picture, y not take a vertical panorama and in the foreground you can place the sheeps if you are near them that will work and our eye has something in the foreground and the headless monster aka mountain in the background....
Overall, I like this picture, but it is a bit dark and you could improve your aim (titel - picture) with another composition I think....
Hope this is helpful, cu at #Unseennature...
But the ground maybe could be a BIT more exposured in my opinion. kinda dark as it is now imo.