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Submitted: February 11, 2012
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The Elixirby ~Smiling-Demon

Digital Art / 3-Dimensional Art / Abstract

A quick abstract I did today. I like the colours myself.
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Critique by ~Sappokei Feb 11, 2012, 8:44:12 AM

Whilst I don't know much about abstract art, I do know this looks amazing. I like the colour choice, being almost opposite each other in the colour spectrum; I think that's why it works so well. The plastic-like sheet that comes from the top left attracts attention to the centre, where the glowing circles pick up that attention, and the burst of shapes also aids this.

There is something about the random shapes that I personally don't like though. It seems too busy, which would be fine, but this contains many random shapes AND different-looking materials. I also feel that the ground texture isn't appropriate. However, I don't know what to replace it with.

I will praise you for your originality though. I understand that abstract art can be hard, and despite my critique, it does look entirely professional and I feel inspired to do something like this.

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~AbikK Feb 11, 2012

Nice, I like your style of abstraction. It is well designed, I love the way you manage lights - I've got feeling like it is everywhere and it creates atmosphere which I like. Good job!